Talk:ContestANTs/@comment-99.39.225.12-20120724205812

Mhana here the new story version I made it into 7 chapters because Lovelylamb said no one gonna read it because it like a big blob and it needs to be separate,and I agree so here the story new version and I also edited the story a little bit so here it is,I hope it won't be to much trouble for and put for summary The Ants discovered a new place but how would they get out? And I shortened the story to chapters now so it not that big now. Please review and tell me what you think and here The story Mhana

Ant Farm In The Land Of The Lost

Originally Released June 23,2012

Chapter 1 Raft Trip

China,Olive,Fletcher,Angus,Sean, and Luke decided to go on a ride on a raft trip for fun on Saturday morning. China goes to the river which leads somewhere and soon Fletcher and Olive arrives and last Sean,Luke, and Angus. Angus got the raft ready while the other chat. Sean: You guys I have a bad feeling about this,I think we should back home. Olive: Sean don't worry it will be fun and it only for 30 minutes ride anyway.

Chapter 2 Sean Story

Sean: Well Your never know when we might get caught in a time door way or in The Land Of The Lost. China: Sean that a movie it not real. Sean: Ok but first it the greatest earthquake ever known. Then a wall breaks in half and another one takes it place, Then were High on the rapids and soak like like tiny walks, Next their a fog,then welcome down a thousand feet but Angus cut him off by saying Ok the raft is ready. So everybody got in the raft. Sean: I'm going to just in case,Im taking my earthquake high ratings device. Everybody nodded.

Chapter 3 Here We Go

25 minutes later. Olive: See Sean it been 25 minutes and no earthquake. Just when Olive just said that,boom their an earthquake. Sean: Oh no next the  big wall. China: Sean theres no big but Fletcher cut Her of by say omg a great big wall is breaking in half. Angus: Omg what happening. Luke: It just like Sean said first the earth quake. Then the great wall. Olive: Now were high on the rapids and soak like tiny rocks. China: Wait Sean you never finish say the rest of it when Angus cut him off talking. Olive shaking Sean by telling him, Olive: What happen next?,Olive said shouting at Sean. Sean next is welcome down a 10,000 feet below to the Land Of The Lost. Everybody  said what. Fletcher: Oh no here we go. Fletcher then kissed China. China: What was that for? Olive: Ah look out. Everybody said ahhhhhhhhh as the raft went down the falls.

Chapter 4 Were In The Land Of The Lost

Soon they all woke up and couldn't believe what they saw dinosaurs,sand,strange trees,and 3 moons. Sean: Omg were in the Land Of The Lost. China: Omg I thought it wasn't real. Olive: Sean you were right. Sean: We better run to a cave. Fletcher: Why? Sean: Because of Grumpy. Angus: Who Grumpy. Then a Te Rex game roaring. Sean: That Grumpy run. Sean: Follow me. They soon came to a cave,they went in and the Te Rex came couldn't get in and soon went away.

Chapter 5 Going To The Lost City

Sean: Ok Im going to the Lost City you guys stay here. Fletcher: Hey I'm coming with you. Sean: Fine but if we don't come back, come look for us. Fletcher: Where is this lost city? Oh it over on the other side of this rock bridge. Fletcher: oh ok,wait what did you say? Sean: Don't worry. Soon they reached the bridge. Sean: Ok Fletcher be careful, just don't start shaking. Fletcher: Ok Sean. Then another earthquake hit. Fletcher: Whoa that was a close one right Sean Sean Sean. Sean: Down here. Fletcher: Oh no Sean I pull you up. Fletcher soon pulls Sean up as Sean was hanging on tight to the rock bridge because if he didn't then he would have fall and die. After Fletcher pulled Sean up,they set off to the lost city they soon get their but are stop by an big green dinosaur.

Chapter 6 Big Allis

Sean calls Big Allis. Sean: Fletcher when I say 3 will run for it ok. Fletcher: Ok. Sean: Ok 1 2 3. Fletcher and Sean Started running and then Big Allis saw them. Oh no Fletcher split up. Sean went to the Left and Fletcher went to the right. Big Allis went for Fletcher. Hey you over size dinosaur over here,Sean said. Then Big Allis went for Sean and Fletcher made it to the entrance but Big Allis was chasing Sean as he was running towards the entrance. Hurry Sean cmon. Sean made it to the entrance and was save by a shoe literally,Big Allis got Sean shoe.

Chapter 7 Enik

As they go through tunnel, Sean went to a open rock door. Sean: Enik. Enik: Yes. Sean: Can you plz help us get back home. Enik: No I can't, I myself is trying to escape this place. Sean: Yea, I pretty much knew that. Enik: How would you know that,you never been here before. Sean: Their was a TV show called Land Of The Lost on Earth where we came from. Enik: Well sorry I can't help you 2 guys right now to get home. Fletcher: Actually their 6 of us. Enik: What their more of you humans here.

Chapter 8 Back At The Cave

Sean: Yep will be going now. Sean and Fletcher made a safe trip back to the cave. Sean tells everybody about something that might and will soon happen. So 1 or 2 of us might or will make it back home. Everybody has a suprise look on their faces. Then looked at Sean. Sean: Hey it not my fault were here,I warned you guys this would happen and it was Angus idea to go on a trip. Soon after a long conversation everybody soon went to sleep except China. China woke Sean up when everybody else was asleep he ask him, China: Sean will we ever get out of the Land Of The Lost? Sean: Trust me China one day, maybe not today, maybe  not tomorrow but we will one day get out of the Land Of The Lost.

Author's note What will happen will they make it out of this mysterious land or will they be stuck their forever. Stay tunned to the sequel. And Review please. And a special thxs to Mhana23 for posting this story and for splitting it into Seven chapters.