User blog comment:Dream catcher101/Teens Rock(except Cameron)/@comment-5040741-20121118142502

OK, love the concept, lacks execution.

SUGESTIONS:

1. Check your grammar. Now.

2. Put different font colors for different people.

3. Make usernames for ALL the characters and have each of them comment.


 * That's all I've got, but besides that, this is really good!!