Talk:Folive/@comment-7167230-20130918010113

This is really lame, but here's my visual of how an episode might turn out to be (if it were meant to be a Folive episode).

When Dixon is forced to leave Z-Tech, due to a transfer for his spy-training, he breaks up with Olive, leaving her feeling alone. Keeping herself away from everyone, including her two best friends, Chyna and Fletcher. When everyone speaks to her alone, they find no use. But when it comes up to the point where Fletcher speaks to her alone, they have an uneasy conversation...at first.

Fletcher says some things that insult Olive, by the way she was currently acting. She tries to explain that she's feeling agitated, since she doesn't find the energy to insult him back. After his insults, Olive-not wanting to fight/argue back-pushes him out of her room and locks him out, sliding her back against the door quietly.

Then she hears Fletcher talking to her again, telling her things that he likes about her, and how he truly sees her. When he finishes speaking to her, he leaves, making Olive feeling dumbfounded with his words.

Later on, Olive cleans herself up, making herself look good, fresh, and happy. She finally leaves the room, making everyone stare at her, wondering who and how did someone find a way to make Olive back to her original state.

She rushes to the roomevator, finding Chyna, Fletcher and Angus playing a new app on their Z-phones.

There, Chyna and Angus got up from the couch, stare at Olive for less than a moment, and immediately hug her.

Fletcher, however, awkwardly stands away from them, thinking Olive didn't hear what he said to her before he left, and was angry at him for saying those insults.

Olive, after being released by Chyna and Angus, walks up to Fletcher and stops herself. Before he knew it...

...she slaps him.

Fletcher stares at her in surprise.

"That was for insulting me!" She screamed at him, making everyone in the room stare at them.

Then, in everyone's surprise, she grabbed the collar of his shirt and kissed him. <

He blinks, still frozen, as she pulls away, and stares at her.

She blushes at him as he beams at her. "And that . . . was for everything else you said to me."

'sigh'

I know I'm not a bright writer, but I still have a passion for writing and I love being creative (:

So please, comment any feedback. What you liked about it, what you didn't like, etc. And I hope you liked reading it ^.^