Talk:Detective agANTcy/@comment-99.57.226.194-20120920063459

Hey here a plot for this story that I think should be.

It was a usual day at the Ant Farm. Fletcher was painting Chyna. Chyna was practicing her music and there I was just sitting on the couch narrating. Olive you know we can still hear you, Chyna said. Olive nodded. Anyway our story takes place about 2 hours ago when Fletcher lost his painting of Chyna! Fletcher knocks on Mrs. Doyle office door. Come in Quimby, Olive says. Mrs. Doyle you must help me, I- but cut off by Olive saying Say no more Quimby I heard you screaming about what happen this morning, Olive says. So will you help me, Fletcher asks. Sure but theirs a catch, you have to keep me away from Angus, Olive says. Oh well that easy, sure, Fletcher says. Ok now where did you last see your painting, Olive says. Well I put it down right next to Angus computer, then I put It right next to Violet and at last I put it in the panic room, Fletcher says. Ok Mr. Parks, Chesnuts, and Violet get over here, Olive shouted.

So what do you think, should I keep going?