Talk:Folive/@comment-7167230-20140201160702

So in my language arts class, we're studying dystopian literature. And since I love writing, I thought maybe I could write a dystopian story for Folive. The characters are OOC in this aha.

Here's my plot: When Olive decides to explore her territory one day, she ends up mistakenly crossing over to another territory. But she didn't know she crossed over. If she left her own territory, she'd earn the biggest consequence of all. A transfer. A transfer occurred when you leave your territory. The directors (basically the leaders) will take you in, erase every single one of your memories, and "transfer" you to another territory, where you will need to create a new life. You won't remember family, or friends, or anything of your past life. There, in the new territory she accidentally crossed over to, she meets Fletcher Quimby. That's when she discovers she crossed over. He tells her about his territory, and she is fascinated by how different his territory his was from hers. But when she tells him she needs to go back home, he tells her he doesn't know how to get her back. So now, she has to pretend to be a part of his territory until they discover a way out. And it's not hard right? Wrong. His territory works differently from hers. His has different rules and is a different lifestyle from hers. So now, Fletcher has to teach her how to be an X (the territories' people are called exes), and help her find a way out. And they only have three months to do this. Why only three months? Because after every three months, Fletcher's territory does a community check. And what's a community check? It's a time where the directors send their guards to check  every single person in the community, making sure that there are no fakes or unknown people that have sneaked in. And Olive is an unknown & fake person that sneaked in.

Yea, so what'dya think?